not affirmative authority, a psalm
there
are no more fires in the
restroom
true I continue to
be
very confident in our position
in
the litigation the data just isn’t
there
you do have your critics
out
there the earth is full of
your
mercy not our business
our
kids are not commodities
finally
let the people decide
I wasn’t
so sure about that very
modest
there’s one side of me
that
says to go ahead the people
should
decide teach me your
laws
I’ve noticed that they’re
exiting
kids as quickly as they
accept
them all it really did was
allow
them the right to proceed
the
halls are no longer like a party
Source
Falkenberg,
Lisa. Not Sold On Abbott’s School Takeover Plan. Houston Chronicle. 25 Apr. 2014. B1, B7
Collier,
Kish. Sports Authority Debt Lawsuit is Back On. Houston Chronicle. 25 Apr. 2014. B2.
Bible
Verse. Psalm 119: 64. Houston Chronicle. 25
Apr. 2014. B8
Krauthammer,
Charles. Court Makes Right Call on Affirmative Action. Houston Chronicle. 25 Apr. 2014. B9
Note:
I
enjoyed this a lot. Given the relatively free range I had, I decided to limit
myself to one section of the newspaper, the B section, which is usually where
local news, opinions, and (I only just discovered this) a bible verse all
reside. Two news items, an opinion piece, and the aforementioned bible verse
gave me all I needed. There were no erasures, but I did play a little loose
with the definition of sentence. In some cases what appeared to be two separate
closures were separated by a colon, which I treated like a period. My starting
two-sentence piece was “there are no more fires in the restrooms. The halls are
no longer ‘like a party.’” Then, I just inserted the most promising of my
building blocks between them, and so on and so on. I finished up by making the
lines roughly the same length and organizing them in a way that I liked.
Here
is the prompt I was responding to:
Larding aka “line stretching.” From your
newspaper text, pick two sentences. Add a new sentence between the first two;
then two sentences in the new intervals that have become available; and
continue to add sentences until the passage has attained the length desired.
The supplementary sentences must either enrich the existing narrative or create
a new narrative continuity.
3 comments:
I really this poem. The title is great!
Ack! editing the previous comment: I really *like* this poem.
No worries! I totally it!
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