Sunday, April 20, 2014

and she has, a sestina


and she has
 
ask for some help if you need it
and she has
an invitation will come forward that you’ll yes to
i started to hear the walls creak and i said lets go
what are you crying about
a different maker’s generic doesn’t work at all
 
it’s not about me at all
garcia could not get a hand on it
that’s what sound science is all about
and she has
an honor to get to go
perhaps schedule a massage or two
 
he can still get a lot better because he wants to
we sail a bit sometimes not at all
and i said lets go
keep putting forth effort and working at it
and she has
that’s what sound science is all about
 
what are you crying about
there will be happiness but a somber moment too
and she has
its not about me at all
he told her to keep it
it’s an honor to get to go
 
we’re ready to stop talking and just go
that’s what sound science is about
ask for some help if you need it
there will be a somber moment too
but sometimes not at all
and she has
 

and she has
to get to go
not at all
crying about
he wants to
need it
 
 
Source
MacInnis, Roberta. Runners Go Extra Mile for Boston. Houston Chronicle. 19 Apr. 2014. A1, A12
Minge, John. Gulf Recovery Efforts are Making Progress. Houston Chronicle. 19 Apr. 2014. B7.
Kaderka, Susan. Damage to Wildlife Remains Significant. Houston Chronicle. 19 Apr. 2014. B7
Creech, Jenny Dial. Happy With His Game. Houston Chronicle. 19 Apr. 2014. C1, C2
Harvey, Randy. Howard’s Postseason Attitude? It’s Super. Houston Chronicle 19 Apr. 2014. C1, C2.
Verdejo, Angel. Lee’s Magic Run Ends With Semifinal Loss. Houston Chronicle 19 Apr. 2014. C6
Duarte, Joseph. Thomas, House Obtain Conditional Releases. Houston Chronicle 19 Apr. 2014. C1, C8.
Bigar, Jacqueline. Horoscope. Houston Chronicle. 19 Apr. 2014. E7.
MacInnis, Roberta. Charter In The Caribbean. Houston Chronicle 19 Apr. 2014. L1, L3
Graedon, Joe and Theresa. E-Cigarettes May Not Help Smokers Quit the Habit. Houston Chronicle 19 Apr.                                                                                                                                                    

 
 Note:
Wow, that was tough. Here is my raggedy sestina. I found myself getting attached to certain phrases and with a limited amount of time. So there are multiple repeats here, especially of the title line. I worked with a small set of sentences, and mainly did erasures.
 

Here is the prompt I was responding to:
 

This will be one of your most challenging Oulipost prompts! A sestina is a poetic form of six six-line stanzas. The end-words of the lines of each stanza repeat those of the first, but in a differing order that in each successive stanza follows the permutation: 615243. The entire sequence of end words is thus: 123456; 615243; 364125; 532614; 451362; 246531. All words and phrases must be sourced from your newspaper text..

1 comment:

Unknown said...

I really like the line "and she has" - the repetition worked here. I scoured your source articles, because I thought you were giving a nod to Gabriel Garcis marquez 9and perhaps you were!); how cool that you got the name from an unrelated article!